Wednesday, September 15, 2010
Adding senses to your writing
5:35 PM | 
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Me, Me, Me, and Mrs. Jones |
Students:
Yesterday we discussed adding senses to your writing. When we add literal and even figurative (there's that big word again) sensory statements to our writing we really start to sound grown up. Can anyone share any other ideas on how you can hear, smell, touch, taste, and see better in your stories?
Miss Samantha shared one with me today that I'll pass on to you...Feeling: I'm steaming in the hot air. Good one, Samantha! Who's next?!?
Yesterday we discussed adding senses to your writing. When we add literal and even figurative (there's that big word again) sensory statements to our writing we really start to sound grown up. Can anyone share any other ideas on how you can hear, smell, touch, taste, and see better in your stories?
Miss Samantha shared one with me today that I'll pass on to you...Feeling: I'm steaming in the hot air. Good one, Samantha! Who's next?!?
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Feeling; I could feel her pain.
My eyes are burning with frustration because my friend was rude to me.
Touch:I feel the water droplet fllow down my cheek as my my ant dies
See:I can see the pain in her eyes as her uncle passes away.
I like #5 and #14 because I can feel the pain and frustration!
I am bursting with anger because I can't watch TV :{
my dad's statement was dripping with sarcasm
see: when we won our first game of the season I could see the excitement on my coach's face!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
feel I feel the pain driping on my sad cheeks.
Feel:I can feel the blood dripping down my leg.
Smell: The smell was so strong it was like a cloud hanging over our heads.
Taste: I could taste the desperation in the world of darkness.
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